Comments on: Writing early morning web news http://www.chriswheal.com/early-morning/ journalist, editor and trainer Sun, 29 Aug 2010 23:12:52 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: bob jones http://www.chriswheal.com/early-morning/comment-page-1/#comment-8 bob jones Thu, 24 Sep 2009 09:00:37 +0000 http://chriswheal.com/?p=1#comment-8 On the behalf of slugabeds everywhere, whew! Rather you than I. best wishes bob On the behalf of slugabeds everywhere, whew! Rather you than I.

best wishes

bob

]]> By: Russell Harriman http://www.chriswheal.com/early-morning/comment-page-1/#comment-7 Russell Harriman Wed, 23 Sep 2009 19:51:29 +0000 http://chriswheal.com/?p=1#comment-7 Most impressive Chris and all before 8am by which time all I've done is walk the dog (and feel hard done by) Most impressive Chris and all before 8am by which time all I’ve done is walk the dog (and feel hard done by)

]]> By: Pete Jenkins http://www.chriswheal.com/early-morning/comment-page-1/#comment-6 Pete Jenkins Wed, 23 Sep 2009 15:14:44 +0000 http://chriswheal.com/?p=1#comment-6 I have been known to take a picture or two Brian :-) I have been known to take a picture or two Brian :-)

]]> By: Brian Kilgore http://www.chriswheal.com/early-morning/comment-page-1/#comment-5 Brian Kilgore Wed, 23 Sep 2009 13:29:16 +0000 http://chriswheal.com/?p=1#comment-5 The pictures of you are fine. Criticism of photos by people who only string the alphabet together don't count anyway. BAK The pictures of you are fine.

Criticism of photos by people who only string the alphabet together don’t count anyway.

BAK

]]> By: Pete Jenkins http://www.chriswheal.com/early-morning/comment-page-1/#comment-4 Pete Jenkins Wed, 23 Sep 2009 10:24:22 +0000 http://chriswheal.com/?p=1#comment-4 Can't help feeling you could have used better pictures of your goodself. Also if all the words are taken from other online journals how do you get the time to check and verify whether theyu are actually accurate and not just regurgitated press releases. Seven stories in two hours sounds like heavy going... Can’t help feeling you could have used better pictures of your goodself.

Also if all the words are taken from other online journals how do you get the time to check and verify whether theyu are actually accurate and not just regurgitated press releases.

Seven stories in two hours sounds like heavy going…

]]> By: Mark Bishop http://www.chriswheal.com/early-morning/comment-page-1/#comment-3 Mark Bishop Wed, 23 Sep 2009 09:56:53 +0000 http://chriswheal.com/?p=1#comment-3 ABI - never the same since I left them. Many people now say it's better -but I doubt it ; - ) Yes a few trypos but you are only human! I'll add you to my following list on Twitter ABI – never the same since I left them. Many people now say it’s better -but I doubt it ; – )

Yes a few trypos but you are only human!

I’ll add you to my following list on Twitter

]]> By: Simone Castello http://www.chriswheal.com/early-morning/comment-page-1/#comment-2 Simone Castello Wed, 23 Sep 2009 09:09:59 +0000 http://chriswheal.com/?p=1#comment-2 I think it's interesting to read what is going on in your daily life as a journalist/human being. I'd edit the copy a bit to make it sharper and avoid repetitions (for instance, I wouldn't repeat Today in second paragraph and I would start with a strong opening, for example an elaboration on lack of stories, which must make your work difficult/dull). Couldn't resist pointing these things out, a sub's old habits die hard. Simone http://fromrattopositiveparent.blogspot.com/ http://london-cheapskate.blogspot.com/ I think it’s interesting to read what is going on in your daily life as a journalist/human being. I’d edit the copy a bit to make it sharper and avoid repetitions (for instance, I wouldn’t repeat Today in second paragraph and I would start with a strong opening, for example an elaboration on lack of stories, which must make your work difficult/dull). Couldn’t resist pointing these things out, a sub’s old habits die hard.
Simone
http://fromrattopositiveparent.blogspot.com/
http://london-cheapskate.blogspot.com/

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